Oyster Meddle
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Oyster Meddle
Name:Oyster Meddel
Age:14
Gender:Male
Classification: Demonic Weapon, Student
Soul Design: a moving soul that looks very upbeat and partying
Physical: Oyster’s hair is greasy blonde with a red stripe at the top, feaux-hawk style with long bangs in the front. His hair barely does not obstruct his vision. His eye brows are short, and his eyes are a strong green. His lips are small, and his teeth are clean and white. He is an inch shorter then Marlow, and much more muscled. He has broad shoulders, and a lean, short neck. He has large hands with long fingers, and weird feet
Clothing: Oyster wears a green hoodie with a large, vivid yellow sun on it, and a white full moon on the back. The sleeves are speckled with obvious stars all over. He wears black slacks and under his sweatshirt he has a white polo on. He has pitch-black fingerless gloves and white tennis shoes
Personality: Oyster is loyal like a dog, but also very very stupid. You could tell him to go buy butter, and then he would buy milk, why? Because it is also dairy. If he had a pet snake, and you lost Mr. Whiskers the rat, he would put it in the cage until you came to pick it up. He may be stupid, but he is very kind, and very loyal. He protects the weak, and makes friends easily. He is also messy and lazy. He likes most kinds of music, especially jazz.
Likes: Steamed oysters, fried oysters, raw oysters, jazz
Dislikes: Ice cream, punk music, libraries, self-righteous people, and thieves
History: Oyster grew up in eastern England, and was born there as well. He had a fun life and a lot of friends even though he was a weapon. He lived in a small village secluded from the outside world where you treated everyone kindly. He had a pet dog and a nice family until some government agents came looking for him. They destroyed the village in search, and he fled to a church nearby. He met a lonely priest to be named Marlow and became his friend. They clicked well, and everything was nice for about a week. Then the government attacked the church, and killed the head priest. He worked together with Marlow to protect the church but it was burnt to the ground while they were battling a few government agents. After the battle ended they traveled around for a while, protecting the weak and going on adventures. One day he found a witch fighting a Shibusen student and accidentally got involved. Marlow and Oyster were destroyed, but a 2 star technician in the area saved those two and dragged them back to Shibusen. He teamed up with Marlow, because at the time he was Marlow’s only friend. He and Marlow separated there room into to parts, one like a church, and another like a party, with beds in the middle. This was because Marlow believed that the room should pay respect to his church and beliefs. Oyster argued that he wanted to have a fun, relaxing carefree room, they had made a compromise which solved the problem. So far they have been at Shibusen for one year.
Best physical characteristic: Endurance
Worst physical characteristic: slow
Best mental characteristic: Willpower
Worst mental characteristic: book knowledge
Best soul energy characteristic: power
Worst soul energy characteristic: control
Best combat characteristics: reflexes
Worst combat characteristic: accuracy
Combat Style: technician whacks enemy/
Soul Based Abilities: shining, muzzles the enemies soul energy while in the light weakens soul based powers by 20%,
Stand Alone Techniques: None
Non Soul Based Techniques: None
Soul Resonance Techniques: Sol Blazing, a stronger form of the shining ability, has same power (weakens by 20%) but wider range and is always shinging and burns the users hand. If not in weapon form it burns the body
Abilities Information
[b]Demon Weapon Info --
Weapon Type: Cross-Stave
Number of Forms: One
Forms --
Form #1: Oyster’s weapon form is a ebony cross, with silver edges. It is long, and the top prong is 1 foot tall, with both side prongs being 2 feet long. Before the crossing the weapon is 5 feet long. It has amber inside it, with obsidian as well making it much tougher then a normal staff would be
Parts Transformable: can create a tonfa edge on his the outside of his arms
Element: light
Souls Eaten: None
Resonance Rate: 20%
Age:14
Gender:Male
Classification: Demonic Weapon, Student
Soul Design: a moving soul that looks very upbeat and partying
Physical: Oyster’s hair is greasy blonde with a red stripe at the top, feaux-hawk style with long bangs in the front. His hair barely does not obstruct his vision. His eye brows are short, and his eyes are a strong green. His lips are small, and his teeth are clean and white. He is an inch shorter then Marlow, and much more muscled. He has broad shoulders, and a lean, short neck. He has large hands with long fingers, and weird feet
Clothing: Oyster wears a green hoodie with a large, vivid yellow sun on it, and a white full moon on the back. The sleeves are speckled with obvious stars all over. He wears black slacks and under his sweatshirt he has a white polo on. He has pitch-black fingerless gloves and white tennis shoes
Personality: Oyster is loyal like a dog, but also very very stupid. You could tell him to go buy butter, and then he would buy milk, why? Because it is also dairy. If he had a pet snake, and you lost Mr. Whiskers the rat, he would put it in the cage until you came to pick it up. He may be stupid, but he is very kind, and very loyal. He protects the weak, and makes friends easily. He is also messy and lazy. He likes most kinds of music, especially jazz.
Likes: Steamed oysters, fried oysters, raw oysters, jazz
Dislikes: Ice cream, punk music, libraries, self-righteous people, and thieves
History: Oyster grew up in eastern England, and was born there as well. He had a fun life and a lot of friends even though he was a weapon. He lived in a small village secluded from the outside world where you treated everyone kindly. He had a pet dog and a nice family until some government agents came looking for him. They destroyed the village in search, and he fled to a church nearby. He met a lonely priest to be named Marlow and became his friend. They clicked well, and everything was nice for about a week. Then the government attacked the church, and killed the head priest. He worked together with Marlow to protect the church but it was burnt to the ground while they were battling a few government agents. After the battle ended they traveled around for a while, protecting the weak and going on adventures. One day he found a witch fighting a Shibusen student and accidentally got involved. Marlow and Oyster were destroyed, but a 2 star technician in the area saved those two and dragged them back to Shibusen. He teamed up with Marlow, because at the time he was Marlow’s only friend. He and Marlow separated there room into to parts, one like a church, and another like a party, with beds in the middle. This was because Marlow believed that the room should pay respect to his church and beliefs. Oyster argued that he wanted to have a fun, relaxing carefree room, they had made a compromise which solved the problem. So far they have been at Shibusen for one year.
Best physical characteristic: Endurance
Worst physical characteristic: slow
Best mental characteristic: Willpower
Worst mental characteristic: book knowledge
Best soul energy characteristic: power
Worst soul energy characteristic: control
Best combat characteristics: reflexes
Worst combat characteristic: accuracy
Combat Style: technician whacks enemy/
Soul Based Abilities: shining, muzzles the enemies soul energy while in the light weakens soul based powers by 20%,
Stand Alone Techniques: None
Non Soul Based Techniques: None
Soul Resonance Techniques: Sol Blazing, a stronger form of the shining ability, has same power (weakens by 20%) but wider range and is always shinging and burns the users hand. If not in weapon form it burns the body
Abilities Information
[b]Demon Weapon Info --
Weapon Type: Cross-Stave
Number of Forms: One
Forms --
Form #1: Oyster’s weapon form is a ebony cross, with silver edges. It is long, and the top prong is 1 foot tall, with both side prongs being 2 feet long. Before the crossing the weapon is 5 feet long. It has amber inside it, with obsidian as well making it much tougher then a normal staff would be
Parts Transformable: can create a tonfa edge on his the outside of his arms
Element: light
Souls Eaten: None
Resonance Rate: 20%
Last edited by Tick! on Wed Mar 18, 2009 7:43 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Re: Oyster Meddle
I'm gonna make a list of questions, sorry ahead of time
Why would the first Soul Resonance you have damage you and the user? That's...so useless
If he isn't a tonfa, he can't turn his hands into them. Please explain or fix this.
If he has no element, how can he produce the huge flashes of light?
His combat style would be how his meister fights with him, not how he solos, please add the other style as well.
Please fix the problems your other person has that related to Oyster.
Those are the only problems I can see, the rest looks perfect.
Why would the first Soul Resonance you have damage you and the user? That's...so useless
If he isn't a tonfa, he can't turn his hands into them. Please explain or fix this.
If he has no element, how can he produce the huge flashes of light?
His combat style would be how his meister fights with him, not how he solos, please add the other style as well.
Please fix the problems your other person has that related to Oyster.
Those are the only problems I can see, the rest looks perfect.
Mimiu- Admin
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Oyster Meddle
The reason why he can create tonfa like stuff on his arms is because he is a cross stave ( a stave with a cross like bar across the top) when he is partially transformed the cross bar appears on the arms.
I edited, and the big light flash that hurts him is his super move which is a transformation like move.
I edited, and the big light flash that hurts him is his super move which is a transformation like move.
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Re: Oyster Meddle
Again, not everyone has body transformations, so there's no point if he's always with his miester. The thompson twins can't do it, neither can Azusa, aside for her eyes.
I don't really get how it flashes out of no where, but as long as you promise abuse it, its fine.
Please explain the Soul Resonance more, it doesn't really make any sense.
I don't really get how it flashes out of no where, but as long as you promise abuse it, its fine.
Please explain the Soul Resonance more, it doesn't really make any sense.
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Oyster Meddle
The idea is the light weakens the enemy while hurting (like getting a fever, it gets worse as it goes more and more) and a few characters can do it (the partial transformation), and I wanna do it.
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Re: Oyster Meddle
Please don't just say "A few people". I'd like examples and the way you type it, it hurts -you- not everyone else.
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Re: Oyster Meddle
Soul Resonance Techniques: Sol Blazing, a stronger form of the shining ability, but is always shinging and burns the users hand. If not in weapon form it burns the body
Explain that more, it makes zero sense. Thats the only problem I have.
Explain that more, it makes zero sense. Thats the only problem I have.
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Oyster Meddle
That means that it hurts the user for using it too long...
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Re: Oyster Meddle
And why didn't you say that? I'm not approving it until you give deep detail on the Soul Resonance, sorry, it really sounds like your leaving out so much useful information.
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Oyster Meddle
The effect is weakening the opponents soul based abilities if they are hit by the light, not by much, just about taking away 20% power.
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Re: Oyster Meddle
....in your sheet please.
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Oyster Meddle
Edited to have more detail on special
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Re: Oyster Meddle
/sigh, I really have no idea what it does from the lack of detail but if you can promise to RP it right and not godmod, I'll allow it.
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Oyster Meddle
You know Soul Authority? well think of when you use that in the special light it is weakened so that it only does eighty percent of regular damage.
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Re: Oyster Meddle
Ahhhh, see, if you just had said that, that would have seriously made so much more sense.
Blizt (Tick), I don't mean to thrash at you, ever, its just you have a tendency to really leave out very important information like that, and it really confuses people a lot.
Blizt (Tick), I don't mean to thrash at you, ever, its just you have a tendency to really leave out very important information like that, and it really confuses people a lot.
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Oyster Meddle
I wasn't actually leaving it out, I was saying it in a weird way. Like speeking Mandarin to a Cantonese person, it would just sound weird.
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