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Marlow Stevens

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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:09 pm

Name: Marlow Stevens

Age: 13
Gender: Male
Classification: Meister
Soul Design: a strange soul, constantly vibrating in an odd fashion.

Physical: He is thin, and very wiry. He has black bags under his eyes from staying up late, and blue lips from being sick. He is a few inches taller then average boys his age, but has less muscles then average. He has a mildly long neck, that makes him seem semi-giraffe like. His eyes are steely blue and his hair is grey-black like twilight.


Clothing: He wears a priest’s outfit with a small silver cross. His shoes are light brown with black souls that reach up to three inches above his ankles. He has a ring with a cross on it on his right hand, and a glove with a stain-glass look painting of a church on it. Under the outfit he wears a ring-mail shirt that has painted on it a cross.

Personality: Marlow is a calm, quaint person who is also a neat freak. He never speaks without someone there to speak to, but isn’t to bright either. He isn’t lazy, but gets excited only when he hears the words, it’s the right thing to do. He has faith in what he believes in, and will not be fooled easily. He has an odd sense of humor, laughing at mostly puns. He never insults anyone and doesn’t like those who swear. He doesn’t make friends quickly and dislikes traitors. He punishes the unjust, even if it is him or his friends.
Likes: Puns, organ music, stain glass, thin bread, holy water, all things symmetrical and the number 8
Dislikes: Rock music, mice, cheese, alcohol, blatantly rude people, messes, oranges (Marlow is allergic to citrus on a large scale), comic books (don’t make sense to him)

Weapon: Cross-stave
Name: Oyster Meddle
Type: demon stave
Element: light
Special Customization: none
Special Abilities: shine, can created a shine that muzzles others abilities,
Misc Information: none really
Link To Partner: https://thesouleaterrp.forumotion.com/character-approval-f4/oyster-meddle-t11.htm


History: Marlow grew up in a church in Western England, near the border of Ireland but he was born by the Pyrenees mountains. Marlow was an odd child, and so he was a loner, and studied the churches ways more then anyone else did. He thought of the head priest as a father, and looked up to him no matter what he did. One day a child came into the church who was special, because he was a weapon. The government in that area was looking for the child to use his power but he escaped them for a while. The father let him in, and protected him from the government until they saw the boy inside and killed the priest in cold blood. The weapon was Marlow’s only friend at the time, and Marlow wouldn’t let him be taken away. He fought with the weapon and defeated a few of the soldiers inside the chapel but they took a different approach. The church was burnt from the ground up the next night when everyone was asleep. Marlow barely survived, but only because the weapon had insomnia. Marlow and the weapon wandered England for a while, until they met a student from Shibusen. The student was in a battle against a witch, and they were even, but Marlow accidentally got in the way, costing the student the battle. Before the witch could kill the Shibusen student Marlow jumped into the battle with his weapon and fought the witch. It gave the student enough time to escape, but Marlow wasn’t going to win. The student ran away, leaving Marlow to die, but luck would have it that a 2 star technician was in the area, so before the witch could kill Marlow it fled. Marlow fell unconscious from depletion of his energy, and the technician took him to Shibusen, along with the weapon. He enrolled in the school, and has been there for 1 year.

Best physical characteristic: Maneuverable/ flexible/ gymnastic
Worst physical characteristic: toughness (not tough(
Best mental characteristic: Tactics
Worst mental characteristic: easily distracted and afraid
Best soul energy characteristic: Control
Worst soul energy characteristic: power
Best combat characteristic: Accuracy
Worst combat characteristic: reflexes

Combat Style: fights with basic release of soul energy released through kicks and punches

Soul Based Abilities: Can use a weak soul blast style move, like black star could at the beginning of the series called soul shiner

Stand Alone Techniques: shiner

Non Soul Based Techniques: shiner (punches them in the eye)

Soul Resonance Techniques: none


Last edited by Tick! on Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:09 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Post  Mimiu Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:16 pm

Well, "Soul Authority" is what your thinking about, that Black Star uses, so please edit that.

Can you explain what "Soul Shiner" is? And did you just meet Oyster, because normally you'd have a Soul Resonance move within a month or so of being partners.

Once I finished reformatting your other dude, we'll cover the rest.
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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:18 pm

Soul Shiner is what Marlow calls Soul Authority, and they met a while ago, I just don't know what the soul resonance moves would be.
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Post  Mimiu Wed Mar 18, 2009 6:22 pm

Then why do you have it down for both Stand Alone but not named in "Soul Based Abilities"? Could you edit it so its like

Soul Shiner: An alternate version of Soul Authority, where the user only aims for their opponent's eye.

Or something like that, you can't honestly expect people to know 100% what you mean when it comes to special moves.
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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:18 pm

Finished with the change/
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Post  Mimiu Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:21 pm

Fix the weapon and its approved.
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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:25 pm

Added link to Oyster's page.
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Post  Mimiu Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:26 pm

Meant "Name: Oyster Bleu" but okay, fix that name thing and APPROVED
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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 8:27 pm

What's the problem with that?
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Post  Mimiu Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:05 pm

...his name is Oyster Meddle right?
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Post  Tick! Wed Mar 18, 2009 9:09 pm

OOPS! I forget that, I was thinking of the french language (i don't speak much of it though) and thought blue so I typed bleu instead.
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