Eryri Queen

Name: Eryri Queen

Age: 16
Gender: Female
Classification: Witch
Soul Design: a soul that is orange, it looks like it is out of control.

Height: 5' 11"
Weight: 143 pounds
Breast Cup: C
Eye(s) Color: Auburn
Eye Shape: like a half circle, turned so that it looks like bird eyes
Skin/Fur Color: pale white
Hair Color(s): Blonde and Blue
Hair Length: long, (to her chest)
Hair Style: strait down, long. With Blue on her rightside and blonde on her left
Distinguishing Features: none

Headgear: a grey bandanna
Earrings: small diamond earings
Upper Body Clothing: a red longsleeve tee shirt
Lower Body Clothing: yellow jeans
Shoes: light blue sneakers
Accessories: a necklace with an emerald on it
Upper Body Armor: none
Lower Body Armor: none

Personality: Eryri likes doing the wrong thing for fun, as long as her little sister is in danger. She is over protective of her sister, and doesn't want Jenny to be like her. Eryri likes acting like a fool as she is an attention hog, but she knows how the world works too. Deep down Eryri knows she is bad but enjoys acting that way so she doesn't change.

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Likes: doing stupid things, doing bad things, protecting her sister
Dislikes: acting responsibly, her sister being in danger
Habits: scratching her head, licking her fingers.
Hobbies: singing, dancing

History: Eryri grew up with Jenny and her sister being witches who wanted to be meisters. Eventually they were sent to Shibusen to deliver something and the oldest sister got captured, they didn't know it, but there was false info, blaming her for an attack on a church were non survived. Eryri saw her older sister get kidnapped in a violent battle. She has been wandering, and protecting Jenny ever since.

Best physical characteristic: stamina
Worst physical characteristic: speed
Best mental characteristic: willpower
Worst mental characteristic: tactics
Best soul energy characteristic: power
Worst soul energy characteristic: reserves
Best combat characteristic: accuracy
Worst combat characteristic: critical hits

Combat Style: magic

Stand Alone Techniques: witch spells

Witch Spells:
Fake hawk: creates a little ball shaped hawk and sends it flying
Float hawk: starts flying toward enemy.
Talon: creates sharp claws at the ends of hands and feet to claw at enemies with.

Abilities Information ((Delete the ones you aren't))

Witch Info --
Power Source: hawk
Spell Chant: chalk hawk alch awk

...still no spells?

Don't know where to put em yet..

There, fixed them both, please lemme know when you add spells, please make sure they relate to the animal type you are.

added spells,

Okay, I'm gonna list a few things right now, I'm sorry but this person isn't made right

1. Your name -has- to relate to related to the animal form, denied until fixed
2. She's so underweight that you'd see her bones. I'm 5'11'' and 134, and I'm not even close to a C cup, denied on that as well
3. Explain your spells better, its extremely hard to understand how its related to a hawk aside from flying, which isn't enough.

1, that kinda kills creativity doesn't it?

2, I hit wrong key for the zero

3, sometimes the spells aren't related, and I'm gonna add another one.

1. I don't give a flying flip about your creative, if your not following the anime on the name, I'm not approving them, period. It can be myth if need be.

2. Raise the weight more, at least 142, breasts are not weightless.

3. All spells keep some resembling to the form, all of medusa's have a point and look like a snake shape, all of Arachne's are spider related, being web, Eruka Frog uses tad poles, its not hard, just think it out some.

You're not gonna aprove cuz of name? then give me name
I added a talon move, and they do resemble, think of making little hawks flying at you

"Eryri", from the word for hawk ("eryr") & means "abode of the hawk".

I'm going to disapprove a few spells, some just don't follow enough. Sorry if that pisses you up, but actually young witches don't have many, I mean, Eruka has 3 spells and she's the same age, Mifune's girl he protects only has 1.

Fake hawk: creates a little ball shaped hawk and sends it flying Approved
Wind hawk: pushes air in a small line toward enemy like a fastball. Denied
Float haw:, starts flying toward enemy. Approved
Nail hawk: shoots fingernails at enemy Denied
Orb hawk: picks stuff of the ground in the shape of a basketball size sphere and shoots it at them Denied
Talon: creates sharp claws at the ends of hands and feet to claw at enemies with. Approved

THose are the three better ones, so yay! (i thought the others were abit of repeats)

Mmmkay, fix the spells, and I'll do one last check over after your other witch.

Finished editing.